Pitch Feeback

After pitching our idea to the class, we got feedback telling us what we can improve on and what works well. We need to:

• Think about having less characters in our sequence
• Use sounds and iconography such as signs of vandalism, graffiti, and crushed beer cans etc to suggest violence and anti social behaviour
• Put all of the viewers attention on the main character by keeping the camera on him and not having too much sound to distract the attention from what he saying as he narrates the sequence